tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6440680180288770901.post8855098597079507243..comments2009-10-22T14:10:14.247-07:00Comments on CVA Blog: Walker Art CenterSam Basqueshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01259599690198853008noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6440680180288770901.post-20832789866721116392009-10-21T20:44:51.048-07:002009-10-21T20:44:51.048-07:00You have a careful eye for work that is startling ...You have a careful eye for work that is startling and raw. The kind of work that seeps into your subconscious and wrestles with your thoughts. So you've described that very well. You need to work on the formal aspects though: Shape, line, color, texture, composition - and not just dropping the words, but really DESCRIBING the work. I think the way you were in the Ann Agee piece was great. I can see how the figures change, their gestures and this line, <br />"If you move your angle so the figurine is at eye level, you'll see that the woman is giving birth, a baby hanging upside down from her rear end and the man is going to catch it." - I can see myself move to be in your place and see what you see.<br /><br />the last few paragraphs are more reactions, and less about what you see. so I would take that further next time.<br /><br />Great Choices on work! The Anne Agee piece description I love.Abbihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02095219224817704271noreply@blogger.com